Year: 2023

200 Word Challenge

200 Word Challenge – Descriptive Language


Look at the picture below carefully and complete the table.

Link to the Picture(Scroll down to find it)

Check on the next page for Step 2.


Who is in the photo? A professional rock climber named Tommy Caldwell and a director of a upcoming National Geographic video named Jimmy chin who is taking a picture of the climber
What is happening in the photo? The Photographer on the right is taking a picture of the professional rock climber who is on the left hand side of the picture.
Where was the photo taken? The photo was taken on the edge of a mountain named Yosemite in Usa,California.
What makes this exciting? The height of where the photo was taken,and Tommy who is climbing the Mountain.
How do you think the characters feel? Tommy Caldwell :I think he is not Nervous but just a bit scared because Tommy is probably used to doing things like this. Jimmy Chin: I also think he is not nervous but scared because he is a professional photographer and already has done lot of things like this.


Write a 200 Word recount as either the CLIMBER or the PHOTOGRAPHER.


Remember; your challenge is to use DESCRIPTIVE Language to SHOW, not TELL your audience what is happening.


Begin your writing here:In the early 2000s a Professional Rock Climber that goes by the name of Tommy Caldwell and a director for a upcoming National Geographic video about a famous mountain called Yosemite in California,Usa climbed Yosemite with 1 other person who right now is unknown.

This photo was a behind the scenes of a upcoming video for National Geographic which has already been published on their website,If you would want to see it then go to their website and find it.

They climbed Yosemite around 4:00 and got up to a amazing height of about 700 feet in the air when they had took this picture.As you can see in the picture is Professional Rock Climber Tommy Caldwell who is on the left hand side of the screen and Photographer Jimmy chin who is on the right hand side of the screen.

In the background you can see more mountains,trees,and also some of the equipment they used to climb up Yosemite.

Their day ended of with them taking a few more shots for the video,until going back to the bottom,collecting their belongings and going back home safely.I hoped you liked this.Bye.

Update Version

Miri and Raru Create Task

Hi and this week for our create task we had to choose between 6 choices,the choices were

Draw or illustrate an important event from the story you’ve been reading using pencil and paper.

Post a photo of your work.

Write a different end to the story you’ve been reading in a Google Doc. Create a cover for the story you’ve been reading using AI tools (OpenArt or Craiyon)
Recreate an important moment from the text you’ve been reading using a photo of yourself as the character. Record a video review of the text including what it is, what parts you liked, and who you might recommend the story to. Create a GIF using Photopea that shows how a character feels in the story you’ve been reading.

I picked “Create a cover for the story you’ve been reading using AI tools (OpenArt or Craiyon)”.When I finished picking I hopped on OpenArt and started writing down Someone Drawing monsters,Once I Write that It came up with a little girl drawing monsters which matched the description of Miri perfectly so I decided to use it for my cover.I then put the picture into google drawings and added some finishing details like the name and the illustrator and I was finally finished.Thanks for reading,bye!

200 Word Challenge

200 Word Challenge

The 200 Word Challenge is an opportunity to practise writing using just the right words. 200 Words might sound like a lot, but once you get going you’ll find yourself crossing that line easily, so be careful to only say what you NEED to.
(This whole thing is over 100 words already)

For Week One your challenge is to write a 200 word recount of a time you…

Tasted the best food you’ve ever tasted.

Remember! This week we have been learning about chronological order. Make sure you get the sequence of events in the right order.

Begin your writing here:I think the best food I’ve ever tasted was when I went to a Korean Buffet with all of my cousins to celebrate 1 of my cousins church ceremonies.When we got in I sat down next to my mum and waited for everyone to get here,when everyone finally arrived they sat down and we started to get our food,when we all got our food we sat down and started to cook the raw food,I had fries some chicken wings and some sausages,they were all so delicious but out of all of them I liked the Fries the most because it was not that salty,while we ate we listened to some Tongan Music,Danced and sang,when we had finished eating we got our desert,I got some ice cream sprinkles and some fruit,it was all so good.When all the kids had finished including me We all went outside and started to play around,after all the parents came out we took a picture together and said our goodbyes and everyone went home.My favourite part about this was when we sang and danced to the tongan music.Thank you for reading,Bye!